HARD CUT TO-
Rob, Spence, Tanner, and Shiloh all inside Bill’s undercover police car, we know this because of the tin red light flashing on his roof.
They race through the deserted streets of the backwoods area. They have to pass the high school first.
INT-CAR-NIGHT 2:30 AM.
Rob, looking at a map with a flashlight, turns back to Spence.
ROB
Ok, we’re almost passing the high school, which turn do we take? The left, or…right..
He keeps looking, his eyes trying to read the small little print.
SPENCE
Uh…I think it was ri-
SHILOH
(Interuprting) Left! It was left!
FRANK
No, you dumbsh-ts, it was straight. Straight into the woods.
Just then, Frank’s jacket begins to make this loud humming sound, as a green light emits from it.
SPENCE
What the hell is that?
Frank tries to grab the Disc, but Spence already has it in his hand.
SPENCE
WHAT THE HELL IS THIS sh-t! What were you thinking!? Did you not hear what that guy said? Now he’s going to come after us!
FRANK
Shut up! You atleast have a home! Money, cloths, what do I got? NOTHING. No money, no job, no go-damn house.
SPENCE
You selfish idiot. THAT THING WILL BE AFTER US. Don’t you understand? And it will KILL us. Now get rid of that thing before…
They turn the corner, and there he is. The Kroul.
The lights shine brightly on him, he stands back, as he takes out his small discs, he c-cks back his arm and body for what looks to be one hell of a throw.
The kids see the Kroul, but it’s too late.
The Kroul throws the discs directly at Bill the driver.
They slice through him like nothing, blood splatters the windshield. The car swerves and spins out of control. It finally stops when it hits a conviently placed pole on the side of the road.
Everyone flies forwards. Rob smashes his face on the windshield, knocking him out cold. The kids all fly forward. But luckly they had the safty of their seatbelts and the chairs to stop them.
The Kroul walks toward the damaged vehicle. Spence wakes Frank up, he motions Frank to get out of the vehicle. Frank is bearly out the door, when Spence shoves him out.
He lets out a yelp.
The Kroul is getting closer.
Shiloh is out next.
Spence tries to wake his dad, but he’s out. Shiloh yells to Spence to move faster. He gives up, and keeps running, hoping the Kroul will pass the car. He does.
They see the High School in the distance.
FRANK
The school!
SPENCE
It’s locked, a--hole!
Frank reaches into his pocket and pulls out a set keys.
FRANK
Swiped this from the janitor's office! Hurry up!
They run faster, up the stairs. They break the glass door open and head into the school.
The Kroul doesn’t need stairs. He jumps up and over the steps, and heads right into the bulding.
The closest room they see is the Wresleing room. Frank unlocks the door.
The Kroul getting a lot closer.
They unlock the door, just as the Kroul lets off a fatal swipe, which misses each kid, and instead hits the door.
The kids run to the stairway. Which is locked of course. They unlock it, and shut it on the Kroul just in the nick of time. The handle jiggles. Their safe…right?
Nope. The Kroul kneels down, and pulls out a tool, and begins to melt right there. The kids book it.
They’re almost down the stairs when the Kroul rips open the door. Like before, he doesn’t waste time with stairs. He jumps down, and lands right as the kids try to shut the door. The Kroul knocks the door open, and sends Frank flying, hitting a weight bar.
Spence grabs Frank and they run out of the room.
They run down a long hallway.
SPENCE
You could…just give it…the damn…disc…
FRANK
Fu…uh..ck...you.
He then runs into Shiloh and Spence, knocking them down. He laughs and waves good bye to them.
Shiloh looks back and sees the Kroul gaining. He holds up Franks keys, and hands them to Shiloh.
SPENCE
GO! Run, get into the equipment room!
SHILOH
I’m not leaving you!
SPENCE
GO!
He shoves her on her way. And stands and faces the Kroul.
The Kroul swipes at Spence, one dodge. Good job.
Not so lucky with the next though. The blade swipes Spence in the chest, causing him to fall. The Kroul keeps moving.
Meanwhile, Frank is running through the school’s long hallways, frantic, but proud of himself.
He sees that the end of the hallway is locked off. Ha! No problem! All he needs is his trusty keys…which are now gone.
A look of shock dawns on his face, he quickly looks around, and sees the Kroul standing behind him.
The Kroul growls at him, and takes out a small round object. He presses a button, and a stream of wet liquid sprays on Frank’s face.
He at first feels disgusted…but then he feels the pain, as his body starts to liquefy. Pieces drip off his face as he screams in agony.
The Kroul reaches inside his coat pocket and pulls out the Disc. He rips the gate open and walks under it. He shuts it back, locking it.
Frank still screaming.
CUT TO-
Shiloh hiding inside the equipment room. She enters the last gate, and hides there. She moves some equipment and hides inside.
The entrence door opens. Loudly. The Kroul stalks its prey.
Shiloh covers her mouth to avoid being noticed.
The Kroul slowly walks past the gates, opening each gate in a violent way. Checking each area for any signs of humans. Everything must be contained. No evidence of the Kroul must be found.
He finally peers into the last gate. It’s locked. This is it. He grabs the same tool he used to open the locked door. And melts it.
He sees Shiloh, and c-cks his head.
He opens the gate. His blade emerges from his sleeve. He slowly walks towards Shiloh.
He strokes her face with his blade. Like he appreciates human beauty. Perhaps he loves fear?
His hand raises for the strike…
Spence appears from behind, with a baseball bat.
SPENCE
BATTER UP!
He smashes the aluminum bat against the Kroul’s head. Knocking him down.
He c-cks back the bat again, and smashes it across the face again.
Spence grabs Shiloh and they get the hell outta there.
They head out into the huge gym, Spence holding onto Shiloh.
JUST THEN, Spence’s arm explodes with gore. The Kroul shot his chain which stuck into his arm. Pulling him back. Shiloh tries to drag Spence back, but its useless as he’s dragged to the Kroul.
The Kroul has Spence in his grasp. He sees the Disc.
SPENCE
You have your disc! Why kill us!
The Kroul presses a button on his mask. He speaks in a metallic voice. Deep, and cold.
THE KROUL
Need to erase evidence. Eradicate those who know.
The Kroul reaches into his “pocket” and retrieves the same device he used to kill Frank with.
The Kroul holds it up to Spence’s face. Hand pressing on the trigger…
WHAM. The Kroul violently flies the other way, and onto the ground. The acidic liquid squirts out, narrowly missing Spence. Spence watches the floor burn and bubble.
The DISC rolls away into nowhere.
It was Shiloh who beat down the Kroul, with the same baseball bat. She drops the bat, and helps Spence on his feat. Shiloh runs over to the keys, which are right next to the Disc. She eyes it. Spencer yells for her, she gets up.
They run fast, faster than they’ve ever ran before.
They rush to the gate, which is locked. They open it…
Frank, or what’s left of him, screams out in agony as he reaches to try and ask his ‘friends’ for help. Frank is goo and bones. His skin is gone, only an eye remains. No vocal cords, so all he makes is this wheezing gasp.
Shiloh screams, but Spence runs past him. He deserved it. The prick.
The Kroul, now pissed to all holy hell, charges after them. He knocks melted Frank across the hall. Landing just in front of Spence and Shiloh. They’re startled, but keep moving.
The Kroul then begins to bound. His bounds reach over 7 feet. So it doesn’t take that long for him to catch up.
Shiloh unlocks the door with the keys, and heads back outside. She trips over herself, and takes Spence with her.
They’re on the road now, lying there. Helpless. It’s over.
The Kroul slowly walks up the kids. He wheezes, as his mask sputters, and coughs.
Lights illuminate the Kroul for a moment, as he is blown back 40 feet.
Its Rob. In a new car. He yells for Spence to get in. He gets out of the car. Holds his gun up, and fires on the Kroul while he’s down.
ROB
Spence, drive!
Spence jumps in, Shiloh in the front. Rob enters the back.
Spence is off. Speeding down the road.
A loud thump on the roof of the car.
The Kroul takes its blade, and shoves it into the roof, trying its hardest to get in.
Spence swerves and weves, wildy, to get the alien off the car.
The Kroul stabs the roof of the car, and hangs down at the side, by the windows.
Rob aims his gun, and fires, missing the KROUL.
The Kroul punches Rob in the face. It’s a hard hit. Harder than he’s recived. Another one. He’s out again. The gun falls under his seat.
SPENCE
DAD!
Spence tries to hit the Kroul against the rock wall, but the Kroul just hops up on the roof.
The Kroul whips out an object that looks like a syringe.
He then grabs Shiloh by the throat and ejects her with it.
She screams for a moment, but then its just reduced to gurgling sounds.
The Kroul still holding onto her, while looking at Spence.
Spence is frantic. He looks all over the car for the gun. The car swerving violently.
He feels the cold object in his hands, and raises the weapon at the creature’s head. He pushes Shiloh back, and fires the entire chamber.
He then runs the Kroul into a light pole. He rolls around on the dirt.
Spence grabs his sleeve and rips it off. Shiloh fades in and out. He uses it to stop the blood flow.
He begins to scream in agony. Emotional agony. He doesn’t want to lose this girl. He cries in anger.
SPENCE
YOU STAY WITH ME go-damn IT! DON’T YOU DIE ON ME. DON’T YOU fu-kING DARE.
Her eyes roll back. Spence lets lose. Screaming, crying.
He rushes to the hospital. His entire world is in slow motion.
He rushes to the counter.
To the nurse, she only see’s a teenager, covered in blood, and gore, crying, screaming for help. She gets off her phone call, and rushes toward the scene.
Spence screams the situation, grabbing Shiloh’s body.
Paramedics rush her, and his dad away. She is pushed through the door, he tries to follow, but the nurses push him back. The doors close on him. Black.
(Understand that it was not written this way, but only copied and pasted here...so I did write it in script format.
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